#BookReview: HENGE By Realm Lovejoy
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I received this ebook from the author for an honest review. Thank you so much. I love being introduced to new authors and stories and love the opportunity to share my opinions.
While I love alternate universes and Arthurian legend, this was a bit hard for me to grasp. Some YA books are just not for me.
There were copy editing errors but even big publishing houses still miss on that every now and again.
The overall story was good.
The plot, a few issues. I understand this to be a series so I probably don’t have everything I need to form a proper opinion. But when someone takes your fire magic abilities away from you early in the book, and then you’re practicing magic in your room only to have another person take your fire magic abilities away from you a little later…well, I scratch my head.
The flow of the story was good. However, the flow of sentences I found a bit redundant. I got really frustrated when I was told A then B then C happened. When C generally follows A, B is a given. Say for instance, “I was in the shower. Then after I dried off I got dressed.” This type of telling bored me.
I read Ms. Lovejoy’s CLAN and didn’t find it that way. So I am wondering if this book was meant for a younger audience?